I really like the composition and colours but maybe the central character needs something extra...nice job though
Can't really distinguish what's going on it it. It's quite messy and I wonder how it got past the queue to be honest, but the colors seem nice and if you invested more time into it I'm sure it'll look lovely.
I agree with Votali - composition is great, but it needs cleaning up and some smoothing.
There is a lot of potential in this piece.
All you gotta do is clean it up a bit, and it will be fantastic!
A bit messy as you said, but the colors and the composition are smart (though I think the beige frame is so-so). Moar!
Great atmosphere! I liked this