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Thank you for your extensivley answer. This was my first picture for such a contest and as well at such a detail-level. I'am really happy about the situation that some people like this animation ![]()
The idea is good, but the execution could be better. Your dithering is too much random and your general shapes could be a little more regular. For example, the bottom part of the whale looks okay, even if the colour choice isn't the greatest, but the upper-front part of the head lacks regularity and it takes the sight away from the piece, it kind of catches the eye too much.
Also, I like the animation of the caudal fin, despite the fact that it isn't a whale's tail, but it looks like it only goes one way.
I know, it should be an exploding star, for sure :)
No, just fun. I totaly missed to transponate this star in the further animation![]()
One of the stars disappears during the animation. Its on the upper left of the whale.
I think its a little bit to "fixed"
The background could move from left to right. The guests are also not very filled with action and the back end (sry, I don't know how its called in english...tail fin?) isn't really sure about in wicht direction it wants to move. Maybe next teime i have to work on this points. But thank you for your greatings!