nice b&w art but what's the building on the right in the wood?
trying to AA the electric line doesn't work, so I changed a little bit the direction of lines. I also changed the bridge. I hope it looks better now.
Seconding Friend regarding AA. with a bit of clean up, this could be really nice.
this has a lot of potential. I like the angularity of your style, but your style does not mean you should forego cleaning up certain lines/clusters/adding some minimal AA where lines are distractingly ugly
@geolm: i'm not sure myself. it could be an abandoned small observatory.. we have an old villa with a similar cupola in the hills near my town