Agree with Mandrill, you should hit the books and try again, though as a line art, this shows some sort of potential, but it's all up to you if you can meet up to that potential.
I was just saying something as we had spend a bit trying to get your PJ password to work over email and stuff.
I don't want to speak for others but I Think you shouldn't take jalonso's comment too seriously. ;)
It is a nice simple start for your first piece.... There are some mistakes though. The lack of AA and proper shading is cerainly a bad thing. The very high contrast feels too agressive and is almost painful to look at.
Don't get discouraged. ;)
Check out Cure's Tutorial
http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=11299
Not sure what you mean? Anti-aliasing? Are you saying it's a good thing or a bad thing?
(Sorry for being a newb ;/)
Pwnd... Don't tell the others about the recent sex shop orders, k?