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After seeing your DeviantArt account, I was wondering why we didn't see more furry pixels from you 
Great job. Nice job with the metal, although perhaps some AA would improve it. I actually think her left arm looks a bit short, but maybe I'm wrong about that, since Manupix didn't mention it. I don't have a great eye for anatomy.
Nice!
Anatomy: legs look short; the pelvis should probably be tilted the opposite way as the staight leg pushes the hip upward.
Shading: the limbs directly facing the lightsource should have brighter highlights than those that don't. This would go a long way to increase depth. Random ref.
Thank you so much guys, I really appreciate it!
@StarQueen
Thanks for your advice!
Nice use of DB32. I might have to practice with it.
I have no complaints, have shadows very well made ... just think a dither would be of good use ...
@Manupix
Thank you so much for your crit, I can see everything you're talking about! Especially the shortness of the legs and the hips, I'll see what I can do about that. I don't think I have the motivation to fix the lighting, but I'll definitely be more aware of that from now on! Thanks once again!
@CELS
Hahahaha yeah, I do love my animals! xD
Thank you! I feel that the whole piece overall could've used more AA, so I definitely agree!