Ok THANKS

I am new in pixel art

thanks for telling me that

Are you using a brush that isn't on 100% opacity? Because there's some wierd spots in this piece: http://i.imgur.com/iJQGAOa.png

There are some things that do seem to have improved slightly from your other pieces such as readability though. The belt sort of throws me off though due to the shading. The legs are also a tad messy. The left arm also suddenly seems to grow a lot on one of the frames.

Do keep up the pixels though! (I would also recommend posting this at x1 instead of x5)