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You usual fine pixelling and great characters. You still get LOVE but I do have comments on your design/layout/composition.
Normally you do a fine job with that but here my eye wants to see this as an evolution but gaining legs and then losing them is just not working for me. This is under the assumption that this is the same creature that evolves as opposed to three characters all on their own. This is where your presentation maybe has a weakness. If its the same that evolves then it should clearly read that way for the viewer. If seperate characters at different stages of evolution then the layout perhaps needs a tweak/edit to help the viewer. Some break in the vertical like a line, a total break or similar.
Also, with so much white space weight over first and second the sides are very tight. Me no likey.
@RileyFiery @Level 1 @MasterSky thanks guys I appreciate it :)
@Harrisonk When I made my first piece with the 3 colour thing I got inspiration from that piece, from there i've been just making pieces in a similar style.
Reminds me of this: http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/74276.htm
This is incredibly stylish, really neat, smooth, even though it has a low number of colors, I can see the luster in the skin, really good job
@Jalonso I agree that the gaining/losing of legs a little off. It is meant to be an evolution per say, though the evolution is quite dramatic considering they don't really resemble each other. Maybe I should've just counted them as individual creatures. I'll edit it to fix both the white space and evolutionary aspects of the piece, i'll simple swap 2nd and 3rd and then atleast there'll still be a pattern of smaller big smaller size wise which will maybe make the white space a bit more pleasent to the eye. Thanks for the advice :)
Edit: Scrap that idea, I just realised that it'll look odd either way because of the size difference, they can stay as evolutions who lose a limb from time to time :b