Texture and shading could be improved on these.  Almost look more like some type of really color space helmets.  It's mostly the lighting on the top and the zipper pouches not really standing out for themselves.

@sir what colors do you suggest?

@shadowfox ew zone

@ottbot How do you think I can improve readability?

I wasn't sure what they were until I read the description, to be honest.

Get ur behind back on zone 

I don't think most of the separate pouch colors match very well. The bags themselves are nice designs!