I think one of your problems is that your colors are static and flat. There's no sense of depth here, and I think that could be remedied somewhat with a different palette that actually complements the blade and adds the contrast this piece needs.
You've got a good idea here, just keep working it. :)
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I think one of your problems is that your colors are static and flat. There's no sense of depth here, and I think that could be remedied somewhat with a different palette that actually complements the blade and adds the contrast this piece needs.
You've got a good idea here, just keep working it. :)