LOL... thanks for the critiques, guys. I'll try to edit some of the noises & hopefully i can make it look better :D.
@CELS: i'll try drawing a smoke, but i'm not sure i can make a good one with a low pixel, yet
@kasparrr: i'll try erasing some colors & reduce some noises. Yep, i'm very miserable in the morning :D
@Zizka, @jalonso, & @jocastus: i'll do my best to make it look not like a toilet... but honestly i don't know how, yet :D.
Good sprite, but yeah it looks like a guy on a toilet until you enlarge it. It's the bare legs and hunched over posture that do it since looking closer up there are no pants aroudn his ankles.
Oh. he's not sitting in the toilet >.<
I think its great regardless.
Same thing here, first I thought the man is sitting on the toilet. I like how the face is simple and clean, the rest unfortunately isn't. You could try to clean that up a bit, erase some colours and maybe leave flat clasters, would be nice If not even better. :D Not a morning person, heh?
That's very cool! I think the bubbles coming from the cup of tea / coffee add a bit of noise. Like, I'm not sure if you're enjoying a nice cup of Earl Grey, throwing glitter in your face or tripping on LSD. Maybe a single white cloud of steam trailing upwards would give more readability.
Also, am I the only one who immediately saw this?
well, sitting on the toilet is indeed also one of the things i routinely do in the morning...