Most of the generation of miracles from kuroko no basket. Done trying to emulate Shawn's style.
I appreciate the edit! The stance looks a lot more solid and natural that way, I definitely have a long way to go. Your work motivates me to keep at it. I think i'll post in the forums before I upload my next piece to get some feedback.
Before I even saw my name in the description, It pulled me in and I felt compelled to have a go and giving it an edit. Not sure if that counts as a compliment or insult but I don't hate them, they definitely do have potential.
I don't watch Kuroko's so I'm not super familiar with the character so I tried to focus more on objective criticism than character specific stuff and the main issue is that the poses don't feel entirely natural or believable.
Typically I recommend starting with really loose sketches you have no issue with resizing, moving, rotating and overall playing with until perfection, before really refining and shading and adding details. It helps to study a bit of gesture and poses from watching real people or just looking at photos or a video or something.
Hope this helps. KEEP AT IT, it's just observation and practice. You'll get there soon enough.
yep that's a big improvement, even if your not familiar with the characters (that's me) you get it!
The colors remind me of the NES palette. I like it, but there's something wrong with the lines on the ball.
The characters from the show do something called going into "the zone". Basically white lasers or something like lightning trails come from their eyes. I'll mess with it a bit.
Nice and clean, :) I'm not sure what the white line is on the second character, but not sure it's working for you.