@JustinGameDesign Thank you so much for this feedback I can't express how helpful it is to have such detailed feedback! I will try take 2 as soon as possible

Fairly good, but I would like to make the following suggestions: I can't tell if it's meant to be a man or woman, first of all. Is the chest lump meant to be side-boob? Second the arms and legs seem to taper away to nothing and need more mass to fit a torso of this length. Third, the coloring of the body is a bit noisy and random and the two colors of the hair read as only one because of the low contrast.

If you could make the gender more clear, add mass the the extremities, and simplifying the coloring, that would help readability a lot.