Took my sweet time, but tweaked a few things along with the hand.

Unfortunately, I had to do it in a rush again, so the fix is a bit sloppy at the moment. Might come back to it again later :P

Thanks again for the feedback, Jal! :D

After closer inspection its not the form, size or placement of the hand really.
Looks like its more about shadowing so the forms read clearly which maybe even includes the neck.

That's very true. I'll get into fixing a few other things that I didn't like later this week and fix this. Thanks for pointing it out!

The hand on the chin is not an easy read is my only crit.