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Thanks for the critique. I had a feeling that something was weird compositionally, but I wasn't sure quite what was wrong. I'll see if I can move a few things around to make it better.
I have some issues with the lightsource. From a composition viewpoint, to have a bright focal point right above (and partially touching) another focal point which is more muted and further down (the cuttlefish) doesn't feel right.
Also, if the lightsource is behind the cuttlefish, I'd assume there would be a strong silhouette and edge-lit effect to it so that the details would be difficult to see, rather than clearly presented.
It is a lovely piece, though.
This is such a calm and wonderful piece. I love cuttlefish, and you definitely captured their graceful whimsy. Great job.