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The face is awesome and very well pixeled (the nostrils might be a bit small / narrow).
The rest has some issues:
- shading isn't clearly indicative of volume, ie in the dress (no clear value continuity between the reds and purples, esp. the dark red and pale purple values strongly inconsistent in cast shadows below the breasts);
- the medium yellow doesn't read as an intermediate skin highlight;
- no light should reach the upper arm underside.
Also I'm no fan of the outline, as it's much darker than anything else and draws the viewer's eye away from the piece focus.
HOLY CRAP XD not intended, but I so see it now XD She's not a witch, but the leader of a cult so it's oddly somewhat appropriate lol
AH, THANK YOU! As I said, I really struggled with the dress so your feedback is invaluable! I tried fixing it up some, but am scared I may have simplified it too much. I lightened the outline too, I initially made it black so that the busts wouldn't blend in with the map, but now realize that's not necessary for posting here lol
Again, thank you so much for your feedback, it's very appreciated :D