@Friend

Yeah, I think at least the 3 shades in the hair might need more contrast, don't know about the other parts, maybe. I'll take a look at the shading if I still make an upgraded version of this at some point in the future. :)

Nice base of colors and solid clusters. Needs more contrast in shading tho

Ok, I just updated the pic to Version 3. :)

Thanks for the feedback. :)

Those are all good points. The hands indeed look a little bit strange now that I think about it. I'll probably turn them and the weights a little bit so that the pose will look more natural. And I'll take a look at the other issues as well, those shouldn't be too hard to fix...in fact I thought about adding the clavicle during the creation process, but then somehow forgot it.

I'll most likely make an updated version somewhere in the near future. :)

I really like the colors. Cool shoes! However, there are some (fixable) probs with anatomy. For placing of hands I highly recommend you to try (but not too hard!) to repeat her placement of hands looking in the mirror. You'll see that either thumbs should be placed inwards and fingers seen or hands should be closer to body. Note how elbows look in both of those poses.
Head and neck - try to imagine vertical line going in the middle of her face and how it curves at top of the skull - and at the back it should connect in the middle of the neck. Try to make same thing with your references and see the relative positions of neck and head. Also google 'beautiful clavicle'.