Hi! It's always practical to include what something originates from (animatorexpo.com/mememe/) in your description, especially if it has a handy link.
Althrough already said, at least a few frames more could have made this tremendously better, as right now it looks like they're just sliding by. Have this as a reference on how another artist interpreted it: illust_id=48126961
Yeah at first i tried to make it smoother, but in the end the hurry (lazyness) got the better on me and i decided to go for the psychedelic effect
Thanks for the info, next time i'll put a link to the origin of the artwork if it is related to some other media