I think this one looks very realistic and (for some reason) cute. Choosen shades are calm and pretty
You've got the form down and I like the colour choice, but you might want to make the lighting direction more obvious.
it's pretty good imo, I like the shape and the shading ain't too shabby either.
I do think though that less "dirty" yellow shades would have helped alot in improving the piece,
Keep it up
Thanks alot for the comments guys, noted!