Refined Ship

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Refined Ship



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Title: Refined Ship
Pixel Artist: VAR-Aaron  (Level 1 Rookie :: 29 points)
Posted: 4/15/2015 02:46
Palette: 11 colors
Statistics:  5 comments    0 faves    0 avatars

I gave the spaceship I was working on another go. I put in some effort to eliminate banding from the last version and gave a less blatent texture for the steel. Increased sharpness & correction to curves to look cooler. How is it? All comments & critiques are welcome!

Edits: Taking corrections into account! Added more refinement & rule of cool like this here smiley

I still see a lot of problems, but at least I'm learning. I'm grateful for all the great suggestions!

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Naji (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 4/15/2015 14:39

you got 2 darker grey shades on the wings that are very similar. you could merge them if you really needed to add one more shade.

only reason I really wanted more contrast was because the rear part has a shiny tone to it unless I'm reading it wrong.
but I do recon that working with these small sizes is hard.
 


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VAR-Aaron (Level 1 Rookie) @ 4/15/2015 14:24

Thanks! I updated with some corrections including a bit more contrast around the bottom. I am trying not to stray too far from the 5 grays I have, so I couldn't do too much without creating more clusters or adding a darker color. Maybe I should split the shade count to 3 grays & 3 slightly olive colors? That's really daring territory for me!


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VAR-Aaron (Level 1 Rookie) @ 4/15/2015 14:20

I've not seen Wall-E, but I am sure I'll love it and it's on my to watch list!


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adscomics (Level 4 Murderer) @ 4/15/2015 08:36

I like it. It reminds me of something....I think it's the Axiom from Wall-E


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Naji (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 4/15/2015 08:34

the steel part could use some more contrast imho, especially towards the lower part of the main body


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