Thanks, man! I appreciate that 

Thanks, Parker. I'll fix some of the rough areas and update. 

I'm with parker on the techical flaws, but the scene itself is quite nice.

I like how you used the pink in order to seperate the canvas into light and dark areas, good design choice. :)

The messy lines and banding hurt the piece--especially with such a limited palette.

This is a helpful thread if you are interested in reading about techniques: http://wayofthepixel.net/index.php?topic=8110.20