On the one hand, I really like this. The visual style reminds me of street art with some Oddworld thrown in, and the motive is pretty much my cup of tea. You always have very rigid palette choices and I'm not the biggest fan of the frames you always do, even though this all hammers in the contrasts. Thing is, I noticed for the first time with this that you actually use multiple shades of the same color for shadows- the contrasts are so low that it looks like very, very few solid colors until you zoom 400%+ in. I'd recommend trying to up that contrast a bit- make the shade for your shadows a tad darker, and if it seems too harsh, maybe try some AA with a midtone. If that's not your thing stylistically, alright, but I think your work could benefit from that.
thanks for the advince man iv never been to good with color :) but i will practice i did notice that the shadows were a little light :) and the borders are just my think i like to frame things help me think for some reason i do it with drawings to .. and your style is right up my ally to man nice and deathly