4Daruda: Thank you too, mainly for a good remark for the others!!! :D
As you have written, finally she will have got a hair, clothes, shoes, and other equipment, so nevermind the shadows, and anatomical disparities NOW!!! :D
4MontyDrake: Thanx for a good feedback too!!! :) I´ll think about it, but it was my plan to make her as more as "chibi" than as the real female body!!! ;)
4AKA_Mathieu: Thanx...:)
Yeah, maybe she has bigger tits, but I have no problem with it,´cos I like it!!! :D
And I don´t know anything about elvish plastic surgery, but Sauron knows what magicians from Middle-Earth do in their free time with their "sheeps"?!? ;D
@Monty SHHHH You can always hide the neck with hair! lol
Good piece, I really like it. I don't know why the "central" face expression looks sadder to me.
It's, in general terms, very a good work, but I need to point out that the head and neck don't seem really correct. It looks like the neck is placed at the center, or near the center, of the roating axis, the same as the cranial vault. I have nothing against the cranial vault being at the center of the axis, but then the neck shouldn't be, as the neck is not really placed at the center of the head, or more correctly, the spine isn't. And is also no as straight as it looks in the image.
That's why I find there's some kind of weird cavity under de mandible, that wouldn't be so hard of the neck went a little backwards. In a proportionate human body (male of female) the neck does not leave that much free space under the skull, and while I know this is chibi (or super-deformed), you should try to smooth that part where the neck and the skull connect to each other. Maybe not casting such a hard shadow under the skull of erasing the line visible between the skull and the mandible in the rear frame.
Nice Iso and anatomic work, but ...
Why she has to have so big breasts; Do elves practice surgery too?
Thank you for very inspirative feedback...:) I will try to repair it ASAP...;)
I think the shading on the lower back/back of the legs could be revisited, shading the thigh below the buttock darker and back of the calfs having some highlights. You have darkened shading in the small of the back which is arguably less occluded from the main source of light than the upper half of the thigh below the buttock. And the rear of the calfs shouldn't be in shadow at all.
Here is a really rushed study because I am using a trackpad.
I hope this feedback proves useful,
Cory.
I might make her cheekbones a bit more subtle- the make her look a bit gaunt right now.