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Haganai!
I have a hard time eyeballing the different regions because of similar brightness, like skin vs hair. It almost looks like a downscale of a larger image because edges are missing here and there (and the noisness typical of NN resize)
Did you also make an error with the shade of the left window?
Now I'm looking at what you'r saying, maybe in some ways you'r right.
I'm thinking the hair doesn't fit in the rest of the drawing, because the entire drawing
is shaded in 1 shadow/color not a noisy effect.
Thanks for replying, I'll try to get an update.
On the whole, this is quite lovely! However, the hair is a bit noisy compared to the rest of the piece, making it feel out of place. It draws the eye when it's not meant to be the focus. I'd make the hair a bit less noisy to fit in with the tone of the rest of the piece.
Hello, thanks for replying.
Tomodachi, Haganai, I just remember it as Tomodachi. :D
in some ways you'r right, I used a rotator tool to get maria's head a bit off.
maybe that is the reason what are you saying there are some missing edges.
And so, the preview image is a smaller version of the detailed submition.
About the window, I don't know what are you talking about, the wall projected shadow? maybe.