Looks like you have a great feel for colouring, but not the same for outlining. The shading id GREAT, really. But the outline need a revising, since the anatomy, armor design and clothes designs needs work.
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If you like that one, be sure to check out this one I did more than a year later in which I used too FEW colors! pixeljoint.com/pixelart/23184.htm