Yeah, I still have to learn where and how use the outlines. I think that's what otakuhn meant too.

I don't mind the black per se, it's not overwhelming, but the issue is more about the near general use of outlines. The jet in particular doesn't need it, or maybe could use a bright one to catch attention. The juice itself might be a brighter color.

The 3 less-used colors might be replaced.

Nice piece anyway, good atmosphere =)

Mmm... yeah, I'll try. Thanks!

Use less black