Animated Doofus

Animated Doofus

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Title: Animated Doofus
Pixel Artist: Chrispy  (Level 7 Sheriff :: 9197 points)
Posted: 8/16/2015 22:08
Palette: 7 colors
Statistics:  8 comments    6 faves    0 avatars

Can't stop won't stop cont.
Edit 8-18-15 added additional frames

 

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Finlal (Level 11 Special Agent) @ 8/21/2015 14:27

Yeah, much better.


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Chrispy (Level 7 Sheriff) @ 8/21/2015 13:29

I seem to have overlooked that paragraph. Fixed again!


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Finlal (Level 11 Special Agent) @ 8/20/2015 06:06

Glad that helped.
Yeah, now it looks more organic. But you did missed few things.
>>Also few minor nitpicks. On 1-2 it's bum is going up, but base of it's leg is going down. Dogs can't grow bones that fast. And on 5-6 somehow is't legs are putting together and right after they are moving apart. I can't understand, why. What force is moving them?


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Chrispy (Level 7 Sheriff) @ 8/19/2015 20:04

I really appreciate this critique! I updated the animation fixing most of the issues you mentioned here. Please let me know if I missed anything!


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Finlal (Level 11 Special Agent) @ 8/19/2015 10:10

It is most noticable on right back leg on frames 4-8.
From 4 to 5 it moves one pixel to the left, then from 5 to 6 it moves one pixel right, then 6-7 on pixel left, and then 7-8 - right. this is what gives jitterness effect. You also can notice it on belly on frames 8-3, front right leg 4-8, bum 5-7 and maybe in few more places.

Also one thing that hits my eye is that you have drawn two variations of the part of the body and you just move it around.
Right ear, for example. You have only two ear  and those positions are far away for eachother. If you do at least one frame in between, it would look much smoother. In perfect scenario each frame should have different ear from previous one.
And it's not onle for ear. Chest, legs, belly.

Also few minor nitpicks. On 1-2 it's bum is going up, but base of it's leg is going down. Dogs can't grow bones that fast. And on 5-6 somehow is't legs are putting together and right after they are moving apart. I can't understand, why. What force is moving them?

I agree with MasterSky, the whole pixelling is nice. And also nose animation is fluid and smooth.


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Chrispy (Level 7 Sheriff) @ 8/19/2015 00:40

Animation is not my forte, but I am working on improving. Any advice on how to reduce that jitteriness?


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MasterSky (Level 6 Yonkyu) @ 8/18/2015 08:38

nice pixelling but the animation looks very jittery to me


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RAV (Level 1 Rookie) @ 8/17/2015 03:05

This dance is doggy style.


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