Hey thank you man! You mean to increase the increase the tone of the light portion the penguin is standing on right? I also think some kind of background might help with the composition, I might try that as well..
Nice! Perhaps decreasing the tone of the blocks and increasing the tone of the platforms would lend a more natural visual wieght. Also value-sculpting the polar bear's volume as you have done to the penguin would add a lot.
Yes, I meant make the tall blocks lighter than the foundation floor. With four colors background can be tricky... maybe keep it as light as possible?