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Well, I'm not really talking about the backstory of the characters, but precisely of what is happening on the screen.
In my opinion, things are going fast without explanations.
In a way, you did well because it looks like a video game, things are going fast and smooth without pause (like in a video game!).
But I don't know the rules of this game, so I'm lost and it's not as fun as it should be for me.
I know these videos mean a lot of work for you, I just say that for you to step back and think twice...
That's because the show starts 2 months after the incident. The script for episode 4 is finished, which will focus more on the origin of the characters.
I watched your videos. Your work is beautiful but the storyline is hard to follow for me.
Sorry for the late reply, I noticed your message just now. I'll try to keep in mind the pacing in the future. I forgot to mention the backstory also covers Vallow's kidnapping, and the events leading up to episode 3.
The good news is I have a secret project that I'll be working on after episode 4 that won't have these flaws.