nice job, very cool looking sprite. It feels kind of fuzzy though, like it lacks sharpness. I think it's a combination of the way the edges are and the dithering. You may want to change the dither for some actual darker/lighter tones to create depth and texture like effects. Also the back of the leg feels unfinished like it has no real edge. You have a created great base that you can tweak and experiment with in order to polish it up, maybe the wip thread in the forums can help, it seems some of the more experienced people hang around there. Thanks for sharing.

It have too much dithering in all the image. Don't overdo it.

The dithering on the skin doesnt look really nice... I know how much dun dithering is but you use it for the skirt and socks, make us thinks she has a weird irrefular socklike skin ;) great job no matter what, especially the hair!