Sword in a cliff

Sword in a cliff

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Title: Sword in a cliff
Pixel Artist: petramortem  (Level 1 Seaman :: 329 points)
Posted: 10/11/2015 13:37
Statistics:  5 comments    3 faves    0 avatars

trying to practice more every day :u

feedback appreciated

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chipg4 (Level 2 Flatfoot) @ 10/12/2015 11:22

I agree with Radio Dog

Making the shadow more transparent and brighter to match the cliff would be the best thing to do.

The other option would be to remove the shadow because the shadow is the center of attention.


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RadioDog (Level 1 Gangster) @ 10/12/2015 01:38

I would say use some other dark color other than black for the shadow, just like you did for the cliff shadows, and also check your light sources, I feel like the sword's shadow direction doesn't match the one on the cliff. And maybe give more detail to the metallic surface of the sword's blade and round tip. The sword is the center piece, but the cliff has more detail than it does.


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petramortem (Level 1 Seaman) @ 10/11/2015 18:07

I've had a couple other people point that out to me as well, but I'm not exactly sure how I would improve it


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StoneStephenT (Level 8 Ruby) @ 10/11/2015 17:31

Yeah, the only glaring problem here is the shadow. Everything else looks good.


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chipg4 (Level 2 Flatfoot) @ 10/11/2015 16:40

great peice, only thing that bothers me is the shadow.


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