July 2015 Redo

July 2015 Redo

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July 2015 Redo



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Title: July 2015 Redo
Pixel Artist: ofbovasso  (Level 1 Rookie :: 456 points)
Posted: 11/12/2015 21:16
Palette: 11 colors
Statistics:  5 comments    10 faves    0 avatars

My character, UU, started out as practice for palette and shape in July of this year. Four months later, I've returned to it simply to test a new color ramp and... well... the original intent escaped me.

For a comparison, you can view the before by clicking through to my blog.

Note: I am always happy to receive C+C! Please and thank you!

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ofbovasso (Level 1 Rookie) @ 11/14/2015 08:50

@Jalonso & @Elk: The leg is very off to me as well. I've tried to play with it several times, and even with the advice from Elk, I just cannot correct it without sacrificing the overall motion. I definitely should've taken anatomy into account when creating this. Gonna keep trying to fiddle with it, though! Hopefully I'll have an update to this in the coming days. Thank you very much for your comments!

@MasterSky: Thank you! Recieving a compliment on AA made my heart flutter, aha. And, yes, the hands are very... non-existent. Perhaps moving the bat behind the foreground hand would fix it until I learn how to properly draw hands at this scale. :')

@AirStyle: That's quite alright. I personally see improvement between the two but I am always looking to further that. I'll keep striving for better! Thank you for your honesty!


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AirStyle (Level 6 SWAT) @ 11/13/2015 09:14

I'm sorry, but I don't really see much of a difference. I mean, some pixels were moved around a little, and the colors were changed, but aside from that, I don't much of a substantial change.

Either way, though, both versions look very nice. I kind of prefer the original colors, though.


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MasterSky (Level 6 Yonkyu) @ 11/13/2015 08:56

wow! amazing colours and AA!

my only issue is that the hands dont really look like theyre holding the bat


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Elk (Level 6 Saber-toothed Tiger) @ 11/13/2015 08:04

wow very smooth, excellent execution of technique

what jalonso means is that the right leg is too long, its longer than the 

left, you could fix this by either reducing the length of the sock and repositioning the left FOOT, or recomposing the legs


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jalonso (Level 11 Godfather) @ 11/13/2015 06:51

Love the colors here. The legs in the knee looks a little odd but can't quite define what seems off :/


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