Ohh, very nice! Her eyes are beautiful, as is her hair. Very very nice. I really like the palette as well, all of the colors work so well together!
With mention of the face, the only recommendation I would have is to shift her chin over a little and make below her cheek a little fuller. Super quick reough example cause I suck at explaining ideas with words lol http://i.imgur.com/HsdQvGT.png
Looks very nice! The anatomy and face seem correct, I'll leave the crits to someone else
Oooh!! I see what you mean, thank you very much! I'll be sure to fix it once I get time :)