Romi Dungeon Mockup

Romi Dungeon Mockup

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Romi Dungeon Mockup



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Title: Romi Dungeon Mockup
Pixel Artist: Makeshiftrobot  (Level 1 Intern :: 81 points)
Posted: 11/21/2015 21:45
Statistics:  2 comments    2 faves    0 avatars

A design mockup for a game I'm woroking on! Critique is encouraged!

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eishiya (Level 7 Bunyip) @ 11/22/2015 08:01

Agered with Lindion45.

I think the gap would read better if you had a transition tile from the green wall to the red wall, perhaps a rounded one, with the light going into the gap a bit.


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Lindion45 (Level 4 Lieutenant) @ 11/22/2015 05:49

Looks cool!

Readability for the tiles in the gap is a bit low though. It's confusing because you use the dark red for wall tiles, but then the wall ends and the tiles are still red!

Also the brick dithering looks a bit wierd with such high contrast between the bricks and the gaps. 

Finally, the pole looks very detailless in comparison to the rest of the piece!


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