Thank you very much and your critique about the flames will come in super handy :D I can't wait to try again!

 Fantastic critique, thank you so so much :) I really needed that, and what great pointers! I feel like re-doing the image already but will do a few more before coming back to the same scene.

Thank you so much again!

 Thank you so much for the critique! I'll definitely work on that :)

 Thank you so much Ashkin!