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TheJacket @ 5/25/2014 10:14 commented on Cat run cycle

Looks great, motion is fluid and easy to read, however, it moves slowly for a running animation, You could remove a few frames or reduce the exposure.

Your usage of light is what makes this piece for me, fantastic work!



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TheJacket @ 5/11/2014 18:57 commented on gon

Fantastic pose, love it



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TheJacket @ 5/11/2014 18:55 commented on Cosmo hero

Mind your colours, most of them have similar saturation values, makes the image flat.

Are there really 30 colours in the piece? looks like you can easily trim some.

The big anime eyes don't read so great, I'd redraw them or shrink them.

I like the background design, though the stars are a bit too colourful and evenly spread.

Add a light source and do some shading!



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TheJacket @ 5/11/2014 12:54 commented on Web Slinger

Thanks for the comments! The background leaves a lot to be desired, It was the last step of the process and I ran out of time.

I do want to get back to it and improve this piece, as I had tons of fun with it. Hopefully after the school stress levels drop a bit.



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TheJacket @ 6/19/2013 05:17 commented on Jogging

Phenomenal on every level.



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TheJacket @ 5/10/2013 00:30 commented on So Many Animals - Redux

Your textures are phenomenal.



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TheJacket @ 5/9/2013 21:31 commented on mirrors

Chameleons are my favourite. I love it.



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TheJacket @ 5/9/2013 21:27 commented on Rock Show

True, I could cut about 8 colours off. It was made from patchwork and not as a whole piece.



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TheJacket @ 5/9/2013 12:06 commented on Ulysses S. Grant

Your light source isn't consistent.

Face has sort of front lightning, body has top, legs got right-ish.

When I need a visual aid when dealing with light I draw my light source on the piece, helps keep it in check.

 

There are always execptions but generally you want to avoid using frontal light

 

 



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TheJacket @ 5/9/2013 11:47 commented on Little Armor Dude

I can feel how cold the metal is, fantastic texture.



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TheJacket @ 5/9/2013 08:47 commented on Boss Battle

You're right, I had a limited canvas and didn't plan ahead as I was making it, so it feels crowded.

I was thinking about redoing it with proper spacing and a vivid background, think I'll get it it soon!



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TheJacket @ 5/6/2013 01:07 commented on John Cleese

Stylish, yet I could easily tell who it is, great work!