Pixel Joint Forum: tree wip

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cheezburger
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Topic: tree wip
Posted: 19 August 2009 at 10:44am

you think this is a good idea?

will update in a moment

found some good colors
update ime :D

Edited by cheezburger - 19 August 2009 at 12:08pm

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PSC159
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Posted: 19 August 2009 at 12:01pm

What's style is this? I haven't seen this style before.

Hey, I am in need of more experience in pixel art. If your up to teaching me pixel art, drop me a PM.

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cheezburger
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Posted: 19 August 2009 at 12:07pm

is that sarcasm :D
i just pixelise the same way i draw so that's why its weird and i'm pretty new to pixelart :S
heres an update :)

Edited by cheezburger - 22 August 2009 at 1:07pm

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Dhr. Bosch
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Posted: 19 August 2009 at 2:00pm

so far i like it pretty much, but the sun is very awkward. perhaps it's not bright enough or too large ore something, but itlooks weird. and i like your style

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Zeratanus
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Posted: 19 August 2009 at 3:53pm

Why does the sun have a black outline? But otherwise it's lookin pretty good.

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cheezburger
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Posted: 20 August 2009 at 9:49am

@Dhr. Bosch i know i realized that too i'm gonna shift a bit of red into it and some white too. The sun is also oval which is just...weird.

@Zeratanus i know im gonna fix that it all just placement of everything the black outline will be removed later :D

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cheezburger
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Posted: 20 August 2009 at 10:38am

so far so good

update 1 new color:

Edited by cheezburger - 20 August 2009 at 11:13am

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cheezburger
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Posted: 21 September 2009 at 2:26am

update time =)

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Manupix
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Posted: 21 September 2009 at 7:25am

You're new to pixelart??? Geez! This rocks!

The trunk is amazing!
Your heavy dithering is very controlled, so it's ok. Be careful with it though, just a few more pixels would make it too much, maybe you can lighten it a little.

The hole in the trunk looks too circular.

I have a problem with that lonely leaf on the left border. Are these leaves falling from the tree?

And you will have problems with the sun: I don't see how you can get away with it so big, and I don't really like it to be in line with the tree. But maybe it's just that I don't see your idea yet.

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Hapiel
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Posted: 21 September 2009 at 8:06am

Wonderful work on the texture!

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cheezburger
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Posted: 21 September 2009 at 11:46pm

@Manupix:
i will try to either make the trunk lighter or the roots darker since i realised that the roots are very light compared to the trunk.
should i try make the hole like this:

the sun is well....
it...
gives more depth to the image although i know its gonna be real hard to make i really want it that way i dont really know why...
the stray leag, i am gonna add more leaves and make it look like they are following a wind which is viewed in here:

better start fixing the stuff :S

@Lollige:
thank man although im not really sure how to texture the leaves on the tree. any ideas

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WIP (Work In Progress)
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cheezburger Seaman Joined: 03 July 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 15	Topic: tree wip Posted: 19 August 2009 at 10:44am
	you think this is a good idea? will update in a moment found some good colors update ime :D Edited by cheezburger - 19 August 2009 at 12:08pm
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PSC159 Seaman Joined: 13 July 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 19 August 2009 at 12:01pm
	What's style is this? I haven't seen this style before.
	Hey, I am in need of more experience in pixel art. If your up to teaching me pixel art, drop me a PM.
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cheezburger Seaman Joined: 03 July 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 15	Posted: 19 August 2009 at 12:07pm
	is that sarcasm :D i just pixelise the same way i draw so that's why its weird and i'm pretty new to pixelart :S heres an update :) Edited by cheezburger - 22 August 2009 at 1:07pm
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Dhr. Bosch Commander Joined: 01 February 2016 Location: Netherlands Online Status: Offline Posts: 215	Posted: 19 August 2009 at 2:00pm
	so far i like it pretty much, but the sun is very awkward. perhaps it's not bright enough or too large ore something, but itlooks weird. and i like your style
	Vanitas, vanitatum omnia vanitas
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Zeratanus Commander Joined: 03 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 576	Posted: 19 August 2009 at 3:53pm
	Why does the sun have a black outline? But otherwise it's lookin pretty good.
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cheezburger Seaman Joined: 03 July 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 15	Posted: 20 August 2009 at 9:49am
	@Dhr. Bosch i know i realized that too i'm gonna shift a bit of red into it and some white too. The sun is also oval which is just...weird. @Zeratanus i know im gonna fix that it all just placement of everything the black outline will be removed later :D
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cheezburger Seaman Joined: 03 July 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 15	Posted: 20 August 2009 at 10:38am
	so far so good update 1 new color: Edited by cheezburger - 20 August 2009 at 11:13am
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cheezburger Seaman Joined: 03 July 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 15	Posted: 21 September 2009 at 2:26am
	update time =)
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Manupix Commander Joined: 07 May 2026 Online Status: Offline Posts: 771	Posted: 21 September 2009 at 7:25am
	You're new to pixelart??? Geez! This rocks! The trunk is amazing! Your heavy dithering is very controlled, so it's ok. Be careful with it though, just a few more pixels would make it too much, maybe you can lighten it a little. The hole in the trunk looks too circular. I have a problem with that lonely leaf on the left border. Are these leaves falling from the tree? And you will have problems with the sun: I don't see how you can get away with it so big, and I don't really like it to be in line with the tree. But maybe it's just that I don't see your idea yet.
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 21 September 2009 at 8:06am
	Wonderful work on the texture!
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cheezburger Seaman Joined: 03 July 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 15	Posted: 21 September 2009 at 11:46pm
	@Manupix: i will try to either make the trunk lighter or the roots darker since i realised that the roots are very light compared to the trunk. should i try make the hole like this: the sun is well.... it... gives more depth to the image although i know its gonna be real hard to make i really want it that way i dont really know why... the stray leag, i am gonna add more leaves and make it look like they are following a wind which is viewed in here: better start fixing the stuff :S @Lollige: thank man although im not really sure how to texture the leaves on the tree. any ideas
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