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   Hello everybody!

First of all, sorry for my english, i'm not a native speaker!
This is my first post and all i want is a little help to improve my pixelart technics! :)

It's a platform game mockup, tribute to the old gameboy style! :)

How can i improve my skills? :)

Thank you!
Regards!

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Programlocura Seaman Joined: 22 February 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Topic: WIP - Plataform Game Mockup Posted: 14 March 2011 at 10:42pm
	Hello everybody! First of all, sorry for my english, i'm not a native speaker! This is my first post and all i want is a little help to improve my pixelart technics! :) It's a platform game mockup, tribute to the old gameboy style! :) How can i improve my skills? :) Thank you! Regards!
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gnodab2 Midshipman Joined: 02 December 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 42	Posted: 15 March 2011 at 5:41am
	I like this style totaly and teh font is beautifull.. But the house in the background seems to be very flat i think!
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Smilecythe Seaman Joined: 22 November 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 24	Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:01pm
	I dont see any spectacular flaws in the style so far. Show us more! Edited by Smilecythe - 15 March 2011 at 2:01pm
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Programlocura Seaman Joined: 22 February 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Posted: 15 March 2011 at 4:23pm
	Hi! :) @gnodab2 The house is flat, i'm going to add some bright to it. @Smilecythe I'll try to send with more detail and color next time :) Thanks for comments! I'll keep practicing!
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W M Commander Joined: 08 November 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 132	Posted: 17 March 2011 at 12:15am
	While the house is indeed flat, I think it adds some serious depth and really works for the piece. I love the whole design, great job there. I really can't find much to critique on -- the only thing i can suggest is trying to make the letters all the same height just for clarity. I understand what you're trying to do, but it CaN eAsIlY bE mIsTaKeN fOr ThIs, and I don't think that's what you want. Keep going with this please!
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