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reaper2259
Seaman
Joined: 18 November 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5 |
![]() Topic: My pixel art (critques wanted)Posted: 19 November 2014 at 3:26am |
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heyy everyone i have decided to make this thread for my pixel art instead of making a new one each time.
any help you guys can give me would be great as i am still very new to pixel art. ![]() this was my first char and am overly happy with the outcome for my first try but i do see it needs massive improvements just don't know how to do those improvements lol. ![]() this is my second ever character that i just finished just then, i have been watching the dragon ball z series lately and wanted to make something based off a reference compared to the first char so i chose to try and make young gohan, i am happy with the shoulder armor from this but i think the overall shape on this one is worse than the last. and tips and things to help me improve would be greatly appreciated. |
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Mosst
Seaman
Joined: 17 March 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32 |
![]() Posted: 19 November 2014 at 9:15am |
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I think the main reason it might look worse is because his torso his so large. Try get a good balance so that everything looks of reasonable size.
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reaper2259
Seaman
Joined: 18 November 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5 |
![]() Posted: 19 November 2014 at 4:38pm |
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yes i agree, i couldn't see what it was before and thought it might have been the legs but now that you mention it i think its the head and body, the head is to small which then made me make the body to big.
thanks for the help. |
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reaper2259
Seaman
Joined: 18 November 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5 |
![]() Posted: 20 November 2014 at 5:21am |
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day 3 new character done, dunno if im improving or not lol but its been good practice and fun.
![]() decided not to do clothes on this one and tried to do some muscles but im not overly happy with them. Edited by reaper2259 - 20 November 2014 at 5:22am |
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Limes
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Joined: 15 September 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 683 |
![]() Posted: 20 November 2014 at 10:07am |
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at this moment the sprite is too small for you to show all the cracks and details of muscle instead you must suggest muscle, I'll give an edit a go.
Have any spare time? |
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