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Quote Okko Replybullet Topic: Sub-Level 13
    Posted: 03 June 2006 at 3:04pm

Hello here, it's me again :)

Here is my second try at pixeling !

Dark Version    -    Light Version    -    "Animation " try:

          

It is very simple right now. Next step will be to add a neon (the flashing light source). I think there will be some details to make it less "clean".

Any C+C are welcome :)



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Quote Okko Replybullet Posted: 12 June 2006 at 1:39pm

I didn't have much time to work on it, but here is a litle update.

Added a few details, but still failed with the neon :(

Thanks in advance for any C+C :)
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Quote Swiifty Replybullet Posted: 12 June 2006 at 2:26pm
It doesnt really look like the sign is attached to the wall. I don't know, this maybe is wrong since I'm pretty new to pixelart myself, but everything seems to be too organized?

Anyway you got a good start.
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Quote Okko Replybullet Posted: 13 June 2006 at 1:47pm

Thanks Swiifty for the comments.

It doesnt really look like the sign is attached to the wall
Well, it is more in my mind a post or even a paint that a sign. But I try to add some shadow to make it less "glue" to the wall, it didn't end right :(

but everything seems to be too organized?
Yep, it's still too clean.  Don't know yet what I will add. I surely have to "used" the bricks..

 

By the way, here is a new update, I finally give the neon a try.

What do you all think about it ? Not sure if I've "enlighted" enough space..
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Quote Swiifty Replybullet Posted: 13 June 2006 at 3:04pm
Looks alot better. Sill the bricks look too organized, and maybe you could add some shadows to the pipe?
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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 13 June 2006 at 3:11pm

Hmm, unless the wall or sign suddenly jerks inwards the light wouldnt suddenly stop like that.

Good progress so far though.
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Quote Swiifty Replybullet Posted: 13 June 2006 at 3:59pm
Yeah, Larwicks right. The light should gradually get darker.
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Quote Okko Replybullet Posted: 14 June 2006 at 2:41pm

Thanks for the comments :)

So I have to work more on the light.

Ok, let me try this :)



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Quote Okko Replybullet Posted: 16 June 2006 at 1:20pm

Here is the result of my try :

I'm not sure if the light is like you were talking

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