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K.s
Seaman 
Joined: 29 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 34 |
   Topic: An I for an IPosted: 29 June 2007 at 1:37pm |
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Well i recently picked up pixel art from a short term break, and well i hope to get better at it
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Christopher
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Joined: 09 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 110 |
Posted: 29 June 2007 at 1:45pm |
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I tihnk its looking great so far, especially the eye itself. |
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Platnium
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Joined: 27 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 319 |
Posted: 29 June 2007 at 1:48pm |
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It needs some eye lashes,and AA around the outside.
Edited by Platnium - 29 June 2007 at 1:48pm |
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K.s
Seaman
Joined: 29 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 34 |
Posted: 29 June 2007 at 2:01pm |
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yeah dont worry i'll take care of that in the next wip
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PixelSnader
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Not a troll! Joined: 08 January 2026 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194 |
Posted: 29 June 2007 at 9:45pm |
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ditherrrrrrr.....
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K.s
Seaman
Joined: 29 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 34 |
Posted: 01 July 2007 at 2:56am |
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updated, however i gave a shot at the eye lashes and they didn't turn out too great so im just going see how i'll do those later on
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SoulChild
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Joined: 28 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58 |
Posted: 01 July 2007 at 3:25am |
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I liked the eye the other way. You should keep it like that but dither in that one.
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K.s
Seaman
Joined: 29 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 34 |
Posted: 01 July 2007 at 3:34am |
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Originally posted by SoulChild that's what i did?
I liked the eye the other way. You should keep it like that but dither in that one. |
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SoulChild
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Joined: 28 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58 |
Posted: 01 July 2007 at 3:47am |
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You don't have the light green or the white in the eye now.
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leel
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Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001 |
Posted: 01 July 2007 at 7:11am |
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I think the upper lid needs to be bigger. Bigger than the lower, even.
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K.s
Seaman
Joined: 29 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 34 |
Posted: 01 July 2007 at 8:07am |
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Originally posted by leel
I think the upper lid needs to be bigger. Bigger than the lower, even. yeah i also need to make it go down a bit more as well
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Omegavolt
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Joined: 03 March 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 227 |
Posted: 02 July 2007 at 6:22am |
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Im not sure if it will improve the picture at all, and you may have just made the eye this way for cosmetic purposes, but the pupil of the eye should be in the direct center of the iris and should not have highlights. (I know the brighter highlight is from the cornea, but the lower, darker highlight looks like its on the pupil itself, and it shouldnt be there. The pupil IS essentially a hole.
The rest looks great though.
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K.s
Seaman
Joined: 29 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 34 |
Posted: 03 July 2007 at 4:25pm |
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ok well i made a few changes
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SoulChild
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Joined: 28 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58 |
Posted: 04 July 2007 at 7:59am |
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Yes, i think that looks much better!
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