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DezireSoft
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Topic: Feedback? :P
Posted: 20 January 2009 at 12:36am

Yeah, suckish, but, feedback, give me some areas that look week[other than the head, and the "elbow-less" >.>

Help me improve.

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Nessiah
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Posted: 20 January 2009 at 1:25am

I think the chest...
He looks too ...1D/2d? I can't really explain it :<

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Evilagram
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Posted: 20 January 2009 at 2:21am

Try practicing anatomy, I mean real anatomy. It always helps to have a good understanding of the human form.

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DezireSoft
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Posted: 20 January 2009 at 11:06am

Originally posted by Evilagram

Try practicing anatomy, I mean real anatomy. It always helps to have a good understanding of the human form.

Yeah, but, it's meant to look sort-of cartoony, not realistic..

The head is just there, to be there, until I decide a better head, then I'm gonna give it more of a 45 degree angle.

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Evilagram
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Posted: 20 January 2009 at 11:32am

Originally posted by DezireSoft

Originally posted by Evilagram

Try practicing anatomy, I mean real anatomy. It always helps to have a good understanding of the human form.

Yeah, but, it's meant to look sort-of cartoony, not realistic..

I hate hearing this. Sorry, but it's just painful to hear.

It always pays to have a good knowledge of realistic human anatomy. It's useful to know how the real thing looks so you don't screw up the minutia when abstracting from it.

Oh, and as for specifics, the crotch looks really creepy. I see what you were going for, but you overdid it.

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DezireSoft
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Posted: 20 January 2009 at 11:37am

XD I know, I didn't care much about the crotch. Thanks for the tip though. I was actually gonna redo a much bigger scaled sprite, since this one is sort of angering me.. XD It's too.. small.

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DezireSoft Seaman Joined: 20 January 2009 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Topic: Feedback? :P Posted: 20 January 2009 at 12:36am
	Yeah, suckish, but, feedback, give me some areas that look week[other than the head, and the "elbow-less" >.> Help me improve.
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Nessiah Seaman Joined: 02 October 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14	Posted: 20 January 2009 at 1:25am
	I think the chest... He looks too ...1D/2d? I can't really explain it :<
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Evilagram Commander Joined: 05 August 2008 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 168	Posted: 20 January 2009 at 2:21am
	Try practicing anatomy, I mean real anatomy. It always helps to have a good understanding of the human form.
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DezireSoft Seaman Joined: 20 January 2009 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Posted: 20 January 2009 at 11:06am
	*Originally posted by Evilagram* Try practicing anatomy, I mean real anatomy. It always helps to have a good understanding of the human form. Yeah, but, it's meant to look sort-of cartoony, not realistic.. The head is just there, to be there, until I decide a better head, then I'm gonna give it more of a 45 degree angle.
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Evilagram Commander Joined: 05 August 2008 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 168	Posted: 20 January 2009 at 11:32am
	*Originally posted by DezireSoft* *Originally posted by Evilagram* Try practicing anatomy, I mean real anatomy. It always helps to have a good understanding of the human form. Yeah, but, it's meant to look sort-of cartoony, not realistic.. I hate hearing this. Sorry, but it's just painful to hear. It always pays to have a good knowledge of realistic human anatomy. It's useful to know how the real thing looks so you don't screw up the minutia when abstracting from it. Oh, and as for specifics, the crotch looks really creepy. I see what you were going for, but you overdid it.
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DezireSoft Seaman Joined: 20 January 2009 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Posted: 20 January 2009 at 11:37am
	XD I know, I didn't care much about the crotch. Thanks for the tip though. I was actually gonna redo a much bigger scaled sprite, since this one is sort of angering me.. XD It's too.. small.
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