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TheFox
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Quote TheFox Replybullet Topic: [WIP] Phone
    Posted: 22 November 2008 at 1:08pm
Hello everyone, I am quite new to pixel art and find one of the things I struggle most with, is actually finishing my pieces. I lack patience when it comes to pixel art so I decided that I was going to start a piece and actually finish it.

Unfortunately it is not going well at all. But that's ok, I will probably learn a lot :D

Anyways, I have gone several different directions and cannot figure out where to go with it:

This first one was a basic outline, not really sure if I should still go with it or not, I might shape up the outline, I might not, not really sure.

 


This second one was a bit of coloring with the same outline(  I think the top portion turned out ok actually):



Some more coloring:



A new angle and lighting direction:



I really have no idea how to make any of these look good.

Please help :(



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Quote Damian Replybullet Posted: 24 November 2008 at 11:53pm
I would comment on this but I don't know where you are going with this.
Please to help other members, post a reference picture so that we no what and how we can help you to get the best out of this piece.
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 30 November 2008 at 3:00am
You really need more straight lines here than the curvy ones. Also, you're pillowshading, which isn't usually advises. Visit the Resources section and look up the n00btorials.
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Quote ellie-is Replybullet Posted: 30 November 2008 at 7:31am
You are also using too many colors and to little contrast.
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