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Quote skeddles Replybullet Topic: creaturething[]small piece, crits please
    Posted: 21 January 2009 at 4:16pm


I did the head first and it came out pretty good, but I don't think the body is as good. Any ideas on how to make it not suck?


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Quote DezireSoft Replybullet Posted: 21 January 2009 at 4:40pm
10/10!!! o.O Dude, amazing.. I love it.  I see no problems, you can actually use that for whatever, it's great, keep it that way.
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Quote Evilagram Replybullet Posted: 21 January 2009 at 4:44pm
Some of the shading on the body around the legs is a tad rigid compared to the dithering in other places, creating a harsh division between highlight and shadow.

Otherwise I think the thing is amazing. I'm definitely going to have a close look at some of the finer elements of the shading.


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Quote Slemboll Replybullet Posted: 24 January 2009 at 11:29am
one thing you can do is a leash in the dogs mouth that would be pretty cool otherwise its awesome
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Quote Platnium Replybullet Posted: 24 January 2009 at 2:14pm
The hair needs a bit more contrast, also add some dithering on the dark shade on the stomach.
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