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RollerKingdom
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Topic: [Rk] - Alien WIP
Posted: 28 January 2009 at 2:28pm

I would like some critics and suggestions

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Quake
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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 2:32pm

you've already made a topic about this..

Please look before ]:

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RollerKingdom
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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 2:35pm

OO my bad i though i did it in other forumm =S

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Dr. Grammer
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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 3:16pm

I'm not good enough to comment on the pixel side but from the view of a everyday person I think the foot looks kinda weird. It just seems way too rounded on the back. An example of what I think it should look more like.

You can ignore this post if you disagree.

Misspelled name is on purpose.

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RollerKingdom
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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 4:11pm

thank you so much ill edit this right now!

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CrisNMP
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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 5:00pm

You also overdid the anti aliasing. I can see it at 100%

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RollerKingdom
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Posted: 28 January 2009 at 5:02pm

Thanks for the tips Cris ill decrease it

here's my new update

Edited by RollerKingdom - 28 January 2009 at 5:07pm

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Metaru
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Posted: 29 January 2009 at 2:32am

you main problem is basically anatomy. if your character isnt made of jelly, then you need to give him bones, a structure, etc. if you're aiming for a humanoid look, then use a human reference for this. and if you cant find the exact same pose, then you can always use multiple references to complete the image. for example, the torso resembles a swimmer, while the lower is a basic walking stance.

I ate leel's babies

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RollerKingdom
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Posted: 29 January 2009 at 4:26am

Originally posted by Metaru

you main problem is basically anatomy. if your character isnt made of jelly, then you need to give him bones, a structure, etc. if you're aiming for a humanoid look, then use a human reference for this. and if you cant find the exact same pose, then you can always use multiple references to complete the image. for example, the torso resembles a swimmer, while the lower is a basic walking stance.

Thanks for the tips but at this point could you point out what is mainly wrong on the anatomy? and since it was an alien i thought it didn't look that bad.
but i am here for critics so yup.

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Metaru
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Posted: 29 January 2009 at 10:43am

Originally posted by RollerKingdom

Thanks for the tips but at this point could you point out what is mainly wrong on the anatomy?

everything

I ate leel's babies

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CrisNMP
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Posted: 29 January 2009 at 12:21pm

Apart from anatomy, I still think you should fix the AA.

Edited by CrisNMP - 29 January 2009 at 12:22pm

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RollerKingdom
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Posted: 29 January 2009 at 12:34pm

Well metaru so i don't have an idea where to start and like how to fix..
so by just saying everything doesn't help that much..

and thanks crisnmp

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Metaru
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Posted: 29 January 2009 at 1:03pm

I ate leel's babies

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RollerKingdom Commander Joined: 11 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 388	Topic: [Rk] - Alien WIP Posted: 28 January 2009 at 2:28pm
	I would like some critics and suggestions
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Quake Commander Joined: 03 September 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 190	Posted: 28 January 2009 at 2:32pm
	you've already made a topic about this.. Please look before ]:
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RollerKingdom Commander Joined: 11 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 388	Posted: 28 January 2009 at 2:35pm
	OO my bad i though i did it in other forumm =S
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Dr. Grammer Seaman Joined: 06 December 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 26	Posted: 28 January 2009 at 3:16pm
	I'm not good enough to comment on the pixel side but from the view of a everyday person I think the foot looks kinda weird. It just seems way too rounded on the back. An example of what I think it should look more like. You can ignore this post if you disagree.
	Misspelled name is on purpose.
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RollerKingdom Commander Joined: 11 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 388	Posted: 28 January 2009 at 4:11pm
	thank you so much ill edit this right now!
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CrisNMP Seaman Joined: 26 December 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14	Posted: 28 January 2009 at 5:00pm
	You also overdid the anti aliasing. I can see it at 100%
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RollerKingdom Commander Joined: 11 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 388	Posted: 28 January 2009 at 5:02pm
	Thanks for the tips Cris ill decrease it here's my new update Edited by RollerKingdom - 28 January 2009 at 5:07pm
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Metaru Commander Joined: 28 December 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 29 January 2009 at 2:32am
	you main problem is basically anatomy. if your character isnt made of jelly, then you need to give him bones, a structure, etc. if you're aiming for a humanoid look, then use a human reference for this. and if you cant find the exact same pose, then you can always use multiple references to complete the image. for example, the torso resembles a swimmer, while the lower is a basic walking stance.
	I ate leel's babies
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RollerKingdom Commander Joined: 11 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 388	Posted: 29 January 2009 at 4:26am
	*Originally posted by Metaru* you main problem is basically anatomy. if your character isnt made of jelly, then you need to give him bones, a structure, etc. if you're aiming for a humanoid look, then use a human reference for this. and if you cant find the exact same pose, then you can always use multiple references to complete the image. for example, the torso resembles a swimmer, while the lower is a basic walking stance. Thanks for the tips but at this point could you point out what is mainly wrong on the anatomy? and since it was an alien i thought it didn't look that bad. but i am here for critics so yup.
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Metaru Commander Joined: 28 December 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 29 January 2009 at 10:43am
	*Originally posted by RollerKingdom* Thanks for the tips but at this point could you point out what is mainly wrong on the anatomy? everything
	I ate leel's babies
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CrisNMP Seaman Joined: 26 December 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14	Posted: 29 January 2009 at 12:21pm
	Apart from anatomy, I still think you should fix the AA. Edited by CrisNMP - 29 January 2009 at 12:22pm
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RollerKingdom Commander Joined: 11 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 388	Posted: 29 January 2009 at 12:34pm
	Well metaru so i don't have an idea where to start and like how to fix.. so by just saying everything doesn't help that much.. and thanks crisnmp
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Metaru Commander Joined: 28 December 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 29 January 2009 at 1:03pm
	*Originally posted by Metaru* you main problem is basically anatomy. if your character isnt made of jelly, then you need to give him bones, a structure, etc. if you're aiming for a humanoid look, then use a human reference for this. and if you cant find the exact same pose, then you can always use multiple references to complete the image. for example, the torso resembles a swimmer, while the lower is a basic walking stance.
	I ate leel's babies
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