Pixel Joint Forum: Smooth Dancer

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   I just made someting black for practising my AA on, but then all of a sudden I saw a torso, and.. yeah, typical me.
The anatomy is quite alright(?) but I can't get the colours right however. 
Anything else that looks off? Let me know!

I'm thinking about adding a collar to him aswell.

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Slemsvamp. Midshipman Joined: 08 December 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 70	Topic: Smooth Dancer Posted: 29 March 2009 at 8:50am
	I just made someting black for practising my AA on, but then all of a sudden I saw a torso, and.. yeah, typical me. The anatomy is quite alright(?) but I can't get the colours right however. Anything else that looks off? Let me know! I'm thinking about adding a collar to him aswell.
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Slemboll Midshipman Joined: 13 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 61	Posted: 30 March 2009 at 10:51am
	du kan ju göra den lite rolig och lägga till en slips och kanske en liten cigarr eller nått liknande dock ser färgerna konstiga ut på magen för "spetsigt"
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Slemsvamp. Midshipman Joined: 08 December 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 70	Posted: 31 March 2009 at 3:25am
	Thinking about making a crowd in the background. He'll probably get a collar or a bow tie, perhaps both?
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vampireslug Commander Joined: 16 February 2009 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 187	Posted: 31 March 2009 at 3:48am
	I think a collar would work but a bowtie, with the red shirt... I'd have to see it. I'm loving what you have so far though, nice lines on the body.
	"The Earth starts to rumble, world powers fall. A 'warring for the heavens, a peaceful man stands tall...." - Mustaine. ©1992 Screen Gems/EMI
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TMH Commander Joined: 28 December 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 291	Posted: 31 March 2009 at 4:10am
	i think you should get rid of the outlin of the hat
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Slemsvamp. Midshipman Joined: 08 December 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 70	Posted: 31 March 2009 at 6:02am
	Collar coming up!
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Slemsvamp. Midshipman Joined: 08 December 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 70	Posted: 31 March 2009 at 7:41am
	More details.. Edited by Slemsvamp. - 31 March 2009 at 7:41am
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Slemboll Midshipman Joined: 13 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 61	Posted: 31 March 2009 at 11:07am
	it looks really good but why put a crowd in the back ?? who dances with the back to the crowd unless hes gonna turn around
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Metaru Commander Joined: 28 December 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 31 March 2009 at 12:51pm
	you have such a defined light source, and you're totally ingnoring it in the shirt. use stronger highlights, since its wquite an strong lightsource the one you're placing over your object. don't be afraid to use more saturated colors on tha cane.
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Slemsvamp. Midshipman Joined: 08 December 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 70	Posted: 31 March 2009 at 5:43pm
	*Originally posted by Slemboll* it looks really good but why put a crowd in the back ?? who dances with the back to the crowd unless hes gonna turn around Yes, I've been thinking about it, but I'd like to refine the main character a little before I start doing such details. *Originally posted by Metaru* you have such a defined light source, and you're totally ingnoring it in the shirt. use stronger highlights, since its wquite an strong lightsource the one you're placing over your object. don't be afraid to use more saturated colors on tha cane. I know I know! I'll try so squeeze another colour in, or at least replace one. And the cane is just a placeholder, for you to get an idea of what direction I'm heading. Thanks a lot! Edited by Slemsvamp. - 31 March 2009 at 5:48pm
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