Pixel Joint Forum: Stoned Stone

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Just noticed I need to change some of those black lines to dark gray...some of the shadings/highlights are really cheap and need to be fixed up, but I think it's looking alright other than that.

C&C? 

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Hytosys Seaman Joined: 06 February 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Topic: Stoned Stone Posted: 10 May 2009 at 5:05pm
	Just noticed I need to change some of those black lines to dark gray...some of the shadings/highlights are really cheap and need to be fixed up, but I think it's looking alright other than that. C&C?
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ZeroFive1 Midshipman Joined: 15 April 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 76	Posted: 10 May 2009 at 7:47pm
	The piece is rather large, so I think it would be great if you added more detail. For example, scratches and small dents here and there. At this point the shading is pretty boring and unexciting.
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Di0xygen Commander Joined: 03 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 401	Posted: 12 May 2009 at 8:25am
	Well first thing first.. the peice is waaaaaaay too large. you have about 90% flat colored pixels. also the lineart is good, but its too black and makes the peice flat. I would suggest reducing the size to about 2 times smaller and give it a more defined shading. And as zerofive said, maybe more details like dent and scratches Here a small edit I did. Kind of went crazy with it, and theres millions of errors, simply to show you how much easier it is to work on a smaller scale
	c==3
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Hytosys Seaman Joined: 06 February 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 13 May 2009 at 5:46pm
	Hahaha, that's some really awesome work. Thanks for the pointers, both of you.
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