Pixel Joint Forum: space ship WIP

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i need loads of help on this one, it just keeps looking flat >.<.
Any tips, suggestions, critics would be greatly appreciated.
i know not everything is shaded, but the parts i have shaded are still flat.

edit: i know the color count is too high i just noticed, i will need to fix that too, increase some contrasts, remove some colors.

Edited by minipuck - 09 June 2009 at 9:10am

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minipuck Commander Joined: 23 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 185	Topic: space ship WIP Posted: 09 June 2009 at 9:10am
	i need loads of help on this one, it just keeps looking flat >.<. Any tips, suggestions, critics would be greatly appreciated. i know not everything is shaded, but the parts i have shaded are still flat. edit: i know the color count is too high i just noticed, i will need to fix that too, increase some contrasts, remove some colors. Edited by minipuck - 09 June 2009 at 9:10am
	please click it, otherwise it will die, and it seems special.
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 09 June 2009 at 9:42am
	In most cases it is because your ship design actually seems to be flat too. It might help to draw a silhouette or so from how your ship would look like from top.
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minipuck Commander Joined: 23 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 185	Posted: 10 June 2009 at 8:41am
	okay i gave up on the old design and made a new design, somewhat like one of the examples, i will change the pallete, and im not done shading yet, but i'd really like some C&C
	please click it, otherwise it will die, and it seems special.
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 10 June 2009 at 12:00pm
	again, how does it look from top? where are the wings, how wide are they and how do they look?
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