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RollerKingdom
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Joined: 11 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 388 |
![]() Topic: Sasuke WIPPosted: 18 June 2009 at 1:18pm |
![]() It's my first time doing something big.. I would like for tips.. I know i didn't start working with his hair and headband yet, but looking forward to get face done first |
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RollerKingdom
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Joined: 11 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 388 |
![]() Posted: 18 June 2009 at 3:59pm |
![]() Okay updated a bit more but Critics & Comments would be rlly helpful ;/ |
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jalonso
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Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
![]() Posted: 18 June 2009 at 4:12pm |
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This canvas is far too big for you, that said.
You have to get the proportions worked out before any further progress. Search for manga/anime tutorials, many exist. The forehead,space between nose and lips and chin are all the same height...think about it. |
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RollerKingdom
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Joined: 11 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 388 |
![]() Posted: 18 June 2009 at 4:24pm |
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AHh I should give up but anyways idc if it looks ugly ill try to fix it to my best and see what is the result ;/ don't want to throw away all my time i spent on it
Edited by RollerKingdom - 18 June 2009 at 4:50pm |
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jalonso
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Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
![]() Posted: 18 June 2009 at 9:26pm |
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Don't give up, make it happen. What I said is my opinion, prove me wrong.
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RollerKingdom
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Joined: 11 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 388 |
![]() Posted: 19 June 2009 at 7:44am |
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I made some few updates and i think it looks much better than what i started with...
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asukicco
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Joined: 02 January 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 92 |
![]() Posted: 19 June 2009 at 9:28am |
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A critics is, for example, that it's not in manga style anymore.
I suggest to draw on paper first, and to practice with manga tutorials and Naruto's references. Also, it's good if you draw some proportion lines (like this) before starting with a more detailed lineart. |
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RollerKingdom
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Joined: 11 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 388 |
![]() Posted: 19 June 2009 at 4:13pm |
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Originally posted by asukicco A critics is, for example, that it's not in manga style anymore. I suggest to draw on paper first, and to practice with manga tutorials and Naruto's references. Also, it's good if you draw some proportion lines (like this) before starting with a more detailed lineart. Thank you, So probably this one doesn't have any salvation.. i will need to redo all. |
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Hatch
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Joined: 05 August 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1387 |
![]() Posted: 22 June 2009 at 3:46pm |
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Hi. I don't think you should give up, but I disagree with jalonso and asukicco: I think you should learn to draw the human face and form accurately and plainly before learning to do so in a particular style--in this case, manga/anime.
Read a basic face tutorial, draw, draw draw drawdrawdrawdraw, repeat. There's nothing wrong with doing the "draw" parts in pixel if that's what you're comfortable with (in my opinion), but there's no way to get around the massive amount of practice required to not suck. The basic knowledge you gain from understanding the fundamental forms and volumes of the human face will be an incredible boon when you start to draw stylistically. just my 0.02$ best o' luck. |
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Elk
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Joined: 12 May 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 483 |
![]() Posted: 23 June 2009 at 5:11am |
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looks like a sasuke, nice!
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