Pixel Joint Forum: I made a WIP thread.

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   I decided it's better to have people correct my mistakes when I don't think I'm finished :) 

*UPDATE*

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You look like a characature already, don'cha :D

Basically looking for any critiques of improving likeness, colours and rendering. etc.

Edited by Jeremy - 04 August 2009 at 11:29pm

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jeremy Rear Admiral Joined: 25 November 2024 Location: New Zealand Online Status: Offline Posts: 1704	Topic: I made a WIP thread. Posted: 04 August 2009 at 4:42pm
	I decided it's better to have people correct my mistakes when I don't think I'm finished :) UPDATE Ref: You look like a characature already, don'cha :D Basically looking for any critiques of improving likeness, colours and rendering. etc. Edited by Jeremy - 04 August 2009 at 11:29pm
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Hatch Admiral Joined: 05 August 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1387	Posted: 05 August 2009 at 3:17pm
	I believe you need more contrast and less red in the skin tones. Also, I don't think the texturing on the forehead near the hairline looks good. I'm not sure why you put that there. Aaaand, the wrinkles on his neck make him look considerably more aged than the reference.
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jeremy Rear Admiral Joined: 25 November 2024 Location: New Zealand Online Status: Offline Posts: 1704	Posted: 07 August 2009 at 5:43pm
	I disagree with the redness comment, everything else taken on board Submit'd
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