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Morror
Seaman 
Joined: 21 November 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2 |
   Topic: What can I do to improve this?Posted: 22 November 2009 at 11:48pm |
It needs revision and since I'm such a newbie I *need* all the help I can get! I'm not stressing it enough huh? 
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Anoniguy
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Joined: 17 May 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 37 |
Posted: 23 November 2009 at 1:18am |
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It's hard to say. What were you shooting for?
If this is meant to be a sphere, and not a flat disc, you might do well to make the shadow more follow the curve of the surface, rather than just the sides of the shape. Light and shadow fall all over a surface, not just the outer edges. |
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Morror
Seaman
Joined: 21 November 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2 |
Posted: 23 November 2009 at 2:47am |
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I'll add more shading then :)
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Manupix
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Joined: 07 May 2026 Online Status: Offline Posts: 771 |
Posted: 23 November 2009 at 1:02pm |
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Maybe this example of a pixel coconut could help you.
I'd also suggest to draw/doodle on paper first, experimenting with various lights. |
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